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People, if you continue to be greedy for money, which is merely a tool for exchanging goods without having to use what you already possess, you will lose sight of yourselves. Many are greedy for it because it can be exchanged for anything. Everyone desires it in abundance to satisfy their own greed, to the point where they forget their true selves.

Listen, everyone. Money is just an object, created to solve human problems. It is not as significant as your lives. It can decay over time and can be destroyed by anything. Though it is highly necessary in today’s world, remember that the thing keeping you alive to this day is your body.

Our bodies are far more miraculous than money. They allow us to do as we please. This is the origin of money — a clever creation of our bodies to solve problems that needed solving. Take good care of your body, for it is what helps you achieve everything within your capabilities. Do not let money become more important than your body.
 
Greed isn’t a personal flaw but a result of a society driven by profit and competition.

The article also ignores how capitalism commodifies the human body, turning labor into something to be bought and sold, often harming workers. While it’s true money arose to solve problems, under capitalism, it worsens inequality and concentrates power.
 
What if Hitler escaped berlin by flinging his bbc around like a helicopter
 
Too short. I need at least 5 heckin' sooorces and 2000 words words words to be able to give you a goodboi piece of paper.
You can resubmit your paper next semester.
 
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