new anti anglo 'jak just dropped

[buckshotgun]

just made him, think he'll take off?

 

[Nihilma]

Remake him, but make the lines thiccer.
Make the beard rougher, simplify and exagerate the lines of the forehead and around the mouth i'd say

 

[Nihilma]

As a rule of thumb I'd say use as reference the style of the base soyjak

Like try to use same level of detail, same thiccness of line, et cetera

 

[scar]

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just made him, think he'll take off?

Doomed from the begining it's over teen

 

[buckshotgun]

As a rule of thumb I'd say use as reference the style of the base soyjakView attachment 1952
Like try to use same level of detail, same thiccness of line, et cetera

I'll probably redraw it later I'm pretty tired rn

 

[buckshotgun]

Doomed from the begining it's over teen

this isnt my first rodeo albeit, I've made like around 10ish jaks I think and only one has somewhat taken off

 

[Nihilma]

https://wiki.soyjak.party/How_to_make_soyjaks

With every try you can improve, as long as you reflect back on what you did and see the flaws.
Ask for criticism and start noticing it yourself.
This article helped me personally

 

[ϪϪϪ]

I'll probably redraw it later I'm pretty tired rn

thicker lines, keep the blast symbol around his forehead it adds something to the character, longer smile line, and simplify like nihilma said