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Soyteen Liker

Soyteen Liker

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The basic premise is that 6 'cord teenagers stumble upon a reality-warping computer game on /b/ that has them complete missions to either defend the world or gain more power for themselves, eventually unlocking more lore about the world and reality, having to decide whether to side with the destroyer or the creator of the world.

I plan to have lots of occult and thriller elements, some missions are INTERNAL which mean they take place within and let the winner get more mental/spiritual power. It's also meant to be quite character driven with an intentionally unclear plot.

What should I know about this type of writing? I can provide more information if requested.

Here's my draft of right before the game loads for them. I think I conveyed the personalities well but I'm looking for critique.

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Soyteen Liker said:
The basic premise is that 6 'cord teenagers stumble upon a reality-warping computer game on /b/ that has them complete missions to either defend the world or gain more power for themselves, eventually unlocking more lore about the world and reality, having to decide whether to side with the destroyer or the creator of the world.

I plan to have lots of occult and thriller elements, some missions are INTERNAL which mean they take place within and let the winner get more mental/spiritual power. It's also meant to be quite character driven with an intentionally unclear plot.

What should I know about this type of writing? I can provide more information if requested.

Here's my draft of right before the game loads for them. I think I conveyed the personalities well but I'm looking for critique.

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No one uses /b/ for anything except for weird porn threads where people share nudes of girls they know, make the board /r9k/ or even /bant/
 
lifesucksthenyoudie said:
No one uses /b/ for anything except for weird porn threads where people share nudes of girls they know, make the board /r9k/ or even /bant/
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I mean it was the board Cicada3301 was posted on but I see your point. I might go with the 'sharty idea though, the text was mostly from 2020 so it wasn't a thing yet.
 
Soyteen Liker said:
The basic premise is that 6 'cord teenagers stumble upon a reality-warping computer game on /b/ that has them complete missions to either defend the world or gain more power for themselves, eventually unlocking more lore about the world and reality, having to decide whether to side with the destroyer or the creator of the world.
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Even doe this is the soysphere, its always nice to see non-soy OC come out of it. It's like if 4cuck only stayed as a loli pedophile website instead of becoming a loli pedophile website with non-pedophile loli boards. Who knows, maybe one of us will start the next SCP or make the troll face of the 2020s.
 
Soyteen Liker said:
The basic premise is that 6 'cord teenagers stumble upon a reality-warping computer game on /b/ that has them complete missions to either defend the world or gain more power for themselves, eventually unlocking more lore about the world and reality, having to decide whether to side with the destroyer or the creator of the world.

I plan to have lots of occult and thriller elements, some missions are INTERNAL which mean they take place within and let the winner get more mental/spiritual power. It's also meant to be quite character driven with an intentionally unclear plot.

What should I know about this type of writing? I can provide more information if requested.

Here's my draft of right before the game loads for them. I think I conveyed the personalities well but I'm looking for critique.

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This sounds a lot like homestuck, sburbia...
 
Soyteen Liker said:
The basic premise is that 6 'cord teenagers stumble upon a reality-warping computer game on /b/ that has them complete missions to either defend the world or gain more power for themselves, eventually unlocking more lore about the world and reality, having to decide whether to side with the destroyer or the creator of the world.

I plan to have lots of occult and thriller elements, some missions are INTERNAL which mean they take place within and let the winner get more mental/spiritual power. It's also meant to be quite character driven with an intentionally unclear plot.

What should I know about this type of writing? I can provide more information if requested.

Here's my draft of right before the game loads for them. I think I conveyed the personalities well but I'm looking for critique.

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If you're looking for a creative way to write it, check out Twine. I've used it for a few projects, fun way to write.
Example: https://nagolbud.com/paradisevalley/exe.html
 
Soyteen Liker said:
Geg it probably does because Homestuck is one of the only pieces of media I got attached to.


Yeah I've heard of that but I don't want it to be interactive.
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marge i did not say that

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