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soyjak.blog
Starbing_Artiste
ImSchizophrenicThough
Hey can I edit it? There are some verb tense mistakes on the first page but I think it could be gemmy.
(Edit: I take it back)
(Edit: I take it back)
centurywalker
What so bad about the story
ImSchizophrenicThough
Main obstacle was punctuation and grammar.
A lot can be cut in the first few chapters, the later chapters get experimental, but nobody is willing to struggle those first few to read them.
Ideally you sandwich your bad writing between pieces of good writing to trick the reader.
If completely overhauled it could be okay, which is exceptional by online writing standards.
A lot can be cut in the first few chapters, the later chapters get experimental, but nobody is willing to struggle those first few to read them.
Ideally you sandwich your bad writing between pieces of good writing to trick the reader.
If completely overhauled it could be okay, which is exceptional by online writing standards.
centurywalker
Whats the good writing and the bad writing
centurywalker
@ImSchizophrenicThough @ImSchizophrenicThough @ImSchizophrenicThough
Look alive and come here,maggot
Look alive and come here,maggot
ImSchizophrenicThough
ESLerald
centurywalker
Give me a serious answer